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My Sweet Fisherette
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My Sweet Fisherette |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL 
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Another one about my sweet canadian rose! ~ My Swet Fisherette ~ Fishing for compliments Casting off of my pier Oceans filled to the brim You will find them here Keep fishing within, my sweet fisherette. Keep casting your hook I am your biggest fan Replenished by my love Catch as many as you can Keep fishing within, my sweet fisherette. A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, [This message has been edited by sellout007 (02-18-2003 02:50 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes, I love this poem. 2 thumbs up Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Waterbirdfly Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 32China |
The forms is like Chinese.Did you read Chinese poets'poems? |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Daniel, I like this. It's very sweet...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
the_loner - Hey, thanks for the thumbs up! Im glad you loved it. Waterbirdfly - Nope never read chinese poetry, never really read any poetry. Only poetry i ever had contact to was what was read to me over the phone by eryn, who this poem is about. garysgirl - Im glad you enjoyed it!! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
How exactly do threads get put back to the top? Anyone? A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
By replying... like I just did.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write, I enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Daniel, this is so sensitive and romantic, sweet friend, you will always make your love happy with these gorgeous words you write, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Good write. Jason |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Reminds me of a certain Weezer song. I like it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
sellout007 Enjoyed the read. |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Glad you all enjoyed it! Thanks for the words. A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i think "charming" is something overstated but it describes this piece more than adequately... [This message has been edited by kaile (02-25-2003 01:47 AM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well do you think this Canadian is voting - YES! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
One more Canadian vote!  ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
whoo hoo go me! haha A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nicely done, it get's my vote  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This Canadian lilac bush (tehe) thinks my fellow Canadian rose is one fortunate flower! Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dan - love to see such radiance in you - this is lovely xxoo |
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