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Severn
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25 posted 02-21-2003 07:14 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You know...it was all going well until I encountered 'hardface' and immediately had a picture of a guy in a fedora, with a cigar, looking furtively from left to right, paper under one arm (probably concealing a gun)...hm...the image is developing - soon I'll write a story about Hardface on the streets of New York and his futile efforts to stop himself eroding

Otherwise - good stuff Ron..

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26 posted 10-27-2003 04:29 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

This to...

I think I might have to do this from time to time just so I don't have withdraws...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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27 posted 05-21-2005 09:16 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

To dance before me
Unable to touch

Split clouds pour
And I am drenched.
Eroding just a bit more
Of hardface

Sing to me thunder
Sing to me
And let the strikes
Come closer
That my heart may stop
This aching reign

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

 
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