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I Still Love You So
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I Still Love You So |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA 
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I guess I miss the writing- The commentary, too. The thing that I miss most of all, Are little notes from you- I'd have anticipation, For every tender line. And hold and kiss you gently, At night, here in my mind. We'd walk a beach together, Beneath a silver moon, I'd sigh and smell your fragrance, My dream would end too soon... I thought that I would write again, My dear, so you would know, Our paths may never cross in life, But I still love you so. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
John, you write wonderful bittersweet themes...romantic yet unfilled emotions...well done.. believe in what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (02-19-2003 04:19 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And I love you too....LOL....how ya been 'Slinger? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this a lot, GS... good to see you posting again! *S* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it!! glad to see you posting again   Charisma |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
Very nice |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
you're such a romantic beautiful! I love this. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad, but beautiful! |
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