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Fauxreal
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0 posted 2003-02-16 03:20 PM


Crossing the valley of Sorrow
Into the mountains of Hope
The calming breeze
Will put you at ease
Clear water to
Help you cope.
You travel barefoot
To these mountains
Over rustic and
Rugged Terrain-
Wondering
How long the journey will take
Or if you'll ever
Get back again.
Seconds turn
To minutes-
Then hours-
Sticky humid nights
Into days,
While the wild
Animal eyes
Of lies
Paralyze you
With their gaze.
Making you wonder
With each chest
Fall and rise
If all poachers
Of the heart-
Don a lamb's diguise.
Still you do not give up
On your trek
Let those sleeping wolves lie
Keep your step
Stir them not-
And take your place...
Right back ON TOP.


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-02-16 04:02 PM




(smiles) This is sooooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, may we respect those all around us as patience and love is what helps make the journey easy instead of being uncomfortable or making others uncomfortable! (sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fauxreal, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-16-2003 04:02 PM).]

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-02-20 04:48 AM



Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-20 04:57 PM


This is very touching and sweet.
Thank you,
Eric

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