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Open Poetry #25

White Rain Cinquain

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-02-16 01:10 PM

Too Cold
Pouring of pure
Layering my struggles
Transforming my worries to touch
White Rain

~M~

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-16-2003 01:15 PM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-02-16 01:17 PM

Ah mother nature is letting the touch of white stuff around today for sure M. Enjoyed this read. hugs

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-02-16 01:26 PM

I have shoveled about ten inches so far, two times this morning and am waiting before doing the next batch but it sure is pretty *s ..almost a blizzard. should be 2 ft by the time it stops down here...now they are saying it will flurry into Tuesday after it dumps this on us.
hugsss
M

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-02-16 05:42 PM

A lovely presentation of the winter's powdery thoughts. Like a lot. ThisDiamond

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-02-16 11:30 PM

Now I can tell you straight out -- This one is a knockout. Maybe the best use of the form that I've seen since we took up the topic in the Workshop.

Absolutely beautiful, absolutely moving.

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2003-02-17 06:48 AM

We have no rain and you have white rain, sounds like an unfair deal to me - on both sides of the world.

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-02-17 07:47 AM

Thank you TD

Hey Keth, we are working on 3 foot of white rain(snow) I am not so sure you want any of it *s

Thanks Ed

glad to see you here.

hugs
M

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