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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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If I could place my words just so, in boundaries that would show their mean Would then, your own be voiced in truth, and spell to me the in between. If undecided tears could steal, the power of my smile, once warm Would then, your touch reach out to me, and trace the gentle of my form. If left to you to grace the still, that waits the time that hides below Would then your eyes dig deep inside and know the love I could bestow. How hard it is, to watch the time and all its moments disappear Wishing for the happiness that once upon was yours, in near. "If only" words control my mind, preparing me for what's to come Either or and neither nor, whatevers there, I will succumb. Following the lead of you, that answers to the need of me Always in my heart, the ache, of loving one to this degree. If I could shape untitled love, and place my words just so for you Would then your light, come rise above, and fill the want, this day, for two. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you do write such beautiful words... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
your words are like music..but why would you want to watch time as it moves fresh moments into the archives of our minds, or cancels them outright? in 4th stanza..should be "is near"?  |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
beautifully said or uh, typed. it is like music. ~*~me~*~ |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Enjoyed reading that, very pretty.! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
BC...I try to write and let the reader feel. Sometimes I am successful, many times not. Martin, thank you *s Time and all that comes with it is fleeting for me, I can't ever grasp it and have it to share for any longer than it takes it to move on. in near...as "in closeness" could have had it, chose not to (my weird way of expressing something that never happened) Quiet Acquiescence,  thank you ~*~me~*~ sellout007, I am happy you could even understand my words. Thanks M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
warm smile |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Deeply moving. Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
warm smile to you too, Dixie. Thank you Ericc |
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