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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-16 10:37 AM



There was a moment when
You whispered –
"Turn to me"
I turned…and now nothing seems
The same.

The world turned with me.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Jason Lyle
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1 posted 2003-02-16 11:22 AM


I like this.Nice job.
Jason

Duncan
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2 posted 2003-02-16 11:37 AM


I like this...but then I like brevity that speaks.  
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-02-16 11:39 AM



Powerfully sensuous...

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Margherita
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5 posted 2003-02-16 06:48 PM


You have discovered the true source of Love! Your poem leaves no doubt.
Love, Margherita

cinnamongirl
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6 posted 2003-02-16 07:16 PM


Aaaahhh... such an incredible, delicious, ecstatic moment- when you turn to face Love, the world does turn with you... for all is tethered to that most beautiful of all things, that connects all souls to that Light...

..and the world turned with me.  And nothing will ever be the same again. Thank you...

Love,
Moca

[This message has been edited by cinnamongirl (02-16-2003 07:16 PM).]

majnu
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7 posted 2003-02-16 08:01 PM


so much i so little - wow.

-majnu
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sellout007
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8 posted 2003-02-16 10:26 PM


Love the poem, lst line did it for me!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

SPIRIT
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9 posted 2003-02-16 10:40 PM


I am so impressed with your work - another case of quality far outweighing quantity. Great!!!!!!!!!!!  
                

carol
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10 posted 2003-02-16 10:41 PM


Ericc, this is so nice

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

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11 posted 2003-02-17 07:41 AM


yes..powerfully sensual... enjoyed this.
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12 posted 2003-02-17 08:53 AM


Extremely well done Eric as always!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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13 posted 2003-02-17 02:23 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh my gosh, I love the revolving door action of this, sweet friend, this made me smile too, may love always make your world seem enchanting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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