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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-02-16 07:49 AM



Half way through midnight
his guiding light flickered,
blinked, cast it's glow elsewhere
Half way through determination
& my temptation
it became clear,
I am here
alone.

Sunkissed.

[This message has been edited by Sunkissed (02-16-2003 07:54 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-02-16 07:57 AM


You know, I think your username is the best one anyone could have ever come up with...they always seem to add the final line to your poetry...

and why isn't this a submission for the book?  Hmmmm?

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-02-16 07:59 AM


born alone,
die alone,
holding on to the inbetween,
liked this mid of the night insight of yours

Sunkissed
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3 posted 2003-02-16 08:00 AM


*chuckles*

Thank you, morning Sunshine.  I have to admit, I've thought about it but didn't think my poetry was good enough.


Sunkissed.

Sunkissed
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4 posted 2003-02-16 08:01 AM


Eloquently said, Inked Goddess. I like that!

Thank you!

Sunkissed.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-02-20 04:56 AM


awesome! just awesome!
Ericc
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6 posted 2003-02-20 08:25 AM


This is truely wonderful!
Eric

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-02-20 08:35 AM


Sunkissed.....this is going into my library.
the poem is drenched with both light and dark. loved it!
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

vandana
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8 posted 2003-02-20 11:54 AM


enjoyed
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