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That Voice
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since 2003-02-15
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0 posted 2003-02-16 06:31 AM


Waking to a world of white that fell throughout the night,
Without so much as a sound covered all the ground.
Still falling in the dawns light, what a lovely sight,
Light wind swirl round, spreading it all around,
Falling heavy from the sky so nothing else can fly,
Seems here we’ll have to stay for the rest of the day,
So as it’s snowing back to bed I’m going
I’m sure I’ll learn it’s here when I return
When I wake, maybe a snowman to make,
I’ll meet you out there in the cold snowy air.


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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
1 posted 2003-02-16 06:35 AM


A wonderful vision of a sleepy, snowy day.
Well done

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2003-02-16 06:36 AM


Brrr,
I'm going to bed after this cold one.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



That Voice
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3 posted 2003-02-16 06:39 AM


KoKo not so much a vision as a fact just looking out the window and writing

Kethy don’t be too cold, extra socks and a warm blanket is what I recommend

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-02-16 06:42 AM


lol, I was saying that's what I got...Because you see, if I look out my window...I see...black. lol.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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5 posted 2003-02-16 10:34 AM


A lovely picture painted.
Thanks,
Eric

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2003-02-16 05:23 PM


Wonderful portrait of a winter's morning.  

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
7 posted 2003-02-16 08:08 PM


snow falls,
another winter day
the sky unseen

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-02-20 04:46 AM


just beautiful!
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