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sellout007
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0 posted 2003-02-16 05:04 AM


Something I thought of today while I was driving in my car. Nothing special, nothing that has a deep meaning, just straight forward. Might try and work it into something else a little later, not sure how it would stand on its own. *shrug*

~ Never Have To Ask ~

I will wait for you,
all you must do is ask.

I will leave for you,
all you must do is ask.

I will love you always,
but this, you will never have to ask.


A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

[This message has been edited by sellout007 (02-17-2003 05:37 PM).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 2003-02-16 05:12 AM


to ask is the task, something I have never been able to do. I like the way you rounded it off without asking.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



1slick_lady
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2 posted 2003-02-16 05:25 AM


"I will love you always,
but this, you will never have to ask."

that is the best part of love of all...h



kaile
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3 posted 2003-02-16 07:22 AM


Ahhh, unconditional love...
inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-02-16 11:54 AM


aaaahhhhhhh, young innocent love, where did it all go?
Albert J. Allie
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5 posted 2003-02-16 10:58 PM


Never having to ask to be loved. That is the greatest gift you can give. You said this was not deep? I beg to differ......
sellout007
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6 posted 2003-02-17 12:39 PM


Thanks alot for all the kind words and replies! Muchos Appreciation!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

regards2you
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7 posted 2003-02-17 07:55 PM



Daniel,

This does have deep meaning, even if short and to the point.

I like it very much.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

sellout007
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8 posted 2003-02-18 12:25 PM


Ok i conceed, it has meaning and deepness! Go me and my bad self! *does a dance* o)

Thanks for the response, really glad you enjoyed it!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

sellout007
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9 posted 2003-02-24 09:22 PM


adding to library

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

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