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majnu
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0 posted 2003-02-16 12:47 PM


Hazardous Waste

Deep as drilling techniques will allow
Buried lies material vile beyond belief;
Yet even as far as it may be stowed away
A simple melody ancient and true, exposes
And carries as a river might wear down
The resilience of mountains mighty and
Bear away their hoarded wealth and waste
To a sea of cognition whence they spill
Over the lip of the disk that is the world.

© Copyright 2003 Zaheer Abbas Ali - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-16 03:27 AM


true, and very sad
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2 posted 2003-03-03 09:54 PM


A poem hard as a carbide bit. I like the way you write this curse, in the truest way it can be said.

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3 posted 2003-03-03 11:14 PM


it's always nice to see this kind of write
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Martie
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4 posted 2003-03-05 07:56 PM


majnu...It is hard to think of what we do without thinking that hurts.  This is good writing!  I was once a student at Berkeley.
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5 posted 2003-03-06 12:19 PM


Thank you for this write. Yep, we've made ourselves a nasty bed, and now we spend our time and money looking for another planet to foul. Isn't that what the space program is really all about?
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6 posted 2003-03-06 02:17 AM


ps, thanks for the read

mr. piper, a curse huh? never thought of it that way - thanks.

pp, glad you liked it

martie, GO BEARS!!!

midnitesun, yes we have hurt our home, but the scientists in the space program are literally seeing stars. WE're not about corporate interest, we are a bunch of little kids who looked at the sky and wondered now grown up - we still see the beauty.

-majnu
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