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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-02-15 08:28 PM










(Here's what I call the "Leftovers". These are Candy Heart Poems written after Valentines Day for the purpose of showing every day should be Valentines Day and always express your love whenever you can, and you can do so without spending money! So find time to love each day, yay!)



IN THE MOOD
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/15/02



Sweetheart, I'm in the mood
Just you, me, and the music
Come, this special night is custom-made for two
Your summer song swoops in like a blitzkrieg

Your sunny smile, stained in pomegranate
And when you bellow from the oceans of your lungs, oh, the eurythmy
I become far-sighted, to your light of day I'm blinded
And I'm faithfully yours, you the gracious ballerina, me your mezzazine



In your language everything sounds provencal
I always wake up and smell more than just coffee
Your water lotus perfume having my instincts dancing in circles
I can't understand your vernacular yet every word you speak sounds so lovely

Sweetheart, I'm in the mood
Let us love like there's no tomorrow
You are God's B-side, you are soul food
You are my savannah sparrow...














"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

© Copyright 2003 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-15 08:49 PM


Noah, you speak the language of love soooo well! This certainly created "The Mood"!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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2 posted 2003-02-15 08:53 PM


I have always said for someone so young, you are well beyond your years and well versed in matters of the heart! She who will love you shall never know what it's like to long for love!

AL

JP
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3 posted 2003-03-05 01:13 PM


Now I'm kinda moody

I love the art!

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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4 posted 2003-03-05 01:16 PM


Great!!!  Work
>>>phantom poet<<<

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5 posted 2003-03-05 01:34 PM


Oh Noah...my sidekick..this is beautiful!
This would put any woman in the mood.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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6 posted 2003-03-05 02:53 PM


Noah, I echo my sister Enchantress's words. Hugs for this one! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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7 posted 2003-03-05 04:13 PM


Noah, I love all the Candy Heart Poems but this one sent shivers up my spine. Outstanding writing and the pictures are fantastic.

You amaze me constantly.

Huggles, Marti

Dwelling on the negative simply
contributes to its power.   
Shirley MacLaine

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8 posted 2003-03-05 04:40 PM


hit me like a Blitzkrieg
enjoyed this very much Noah

Thomas

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9 posted 2003-03-05 06:01 PM


Once again..excellent work Noah.
Eric

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10 posted 2003-03-05 07:43 PM


enjoyed
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