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Obsession |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Infatuation, Concentration, Destiny, Confess to me. Sugary sweet, Rising heat, Salty air, Forbidden Lair. Broken-out sweat, Inescapable net, Unkept secret, Something so needed. Devilish purity, So much security, Only wanting to tease, Only wanting to please. **Quite an old poem of mine...But I found it again when searching through all my poems.*** I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very creative! Eric |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
WOW!! I liked THIS one!! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Lol! Thanks much!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
the old ones are always the best |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
This was great! BlueEyes |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very interesting poem. I liked it...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked the ending especially. Glad you found this and decided to post it again. *enjoyed* |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Nicely written and very creative. Eric |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 i like! |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
i love how short and sweet the poem is, i loved it, Shayne |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Not bad.  One of your best work.  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
an oldie but goodie |
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Hevnlyfoxy Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 10NYC, NY |
I'm new here ...and I've been reading a few poems here and there..I must say..this is the best one I've read so far...I loved it!!!an oldie but goodie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Great poem! It's a good thing that you brought it back out into the light of day! Warm Irish hugs and shamrock wishes! Earth Angel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you found it and shared with us |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Oh wow!!!!! Thanks everyone!!!!! Your kind words mean so much to me!!! I cannot thank you enough!!! Hugs to all!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
MMM.... i liked that a lot. Thank you. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
Very nice poem. I liked how short it was also. Got right to the point. Keep up the good work. ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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