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vandana
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0 posted 2003-02-15 05:41 PM



I have seen starlight over the Rome
I have been everywhere in Rome
I have eaten saffron pilaf
At the Terrasse de Cafe
I have watched sunflowers radite
Through the day
I thank everything to you
The moment you touch my hand

The moment you touch my hand
I felt my heart started to sing
You are my love and my only love
You are spical person
I care for you
You made this moment so spical
I thank you everything to you
The moment you touch my hand

I have marveled flamingos in Santingo
I have noticed the gaslights flickers
In San Diego
I have savored the ripe olives off the
Branch In Sevilla
I have smelled the encuplyptus
In Austrilla

You touch my hand
And made my heart sing
yes,I have been looking
At a place
For such a face
Now I found love
A love to thank you
Everything
That you gave to me
When you touch my hand
I feel the earth moving
around me
And I like to thank you
to give me such a love

None of this could be possible
Had you never let me
Touch your hand


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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-02-15 05:53 PM


Vandana - this is lovely, you and Noah make a great pair for a duet...

BC

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2 posted 2003-02-15 06:15 PM


Bravo!
Margherita
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3 posted 2003-02-15 06:27 PM


How comes I missed you ....while you were everywhere in Rome?
haha
This is really lovely!
Margherita

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4 posted 2003-02-15 07:06 PM


What a wonderful duet... I love how you guys talk about going to all the beautiful places looking for such a sight and feeling, but finding it only in that person you love. Great!!

Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-02-15 07:21 PM


Vandana, this is very pretty. You and Noah did
very good. I loved it.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Albert J. Allie
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6 posted 2003-02-16 12:45 PM




Wildly beautiful!! How else can i describe it but to say.....*SIGH

Aimster
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7 posted 2003-02-16 01:18 AM


beautiful duet between yourself and noah...
lovely write, very inspirational.

take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-02-18 03:16 PM


Enjoyed...James
Ericc
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9 posted 2003-02-18 03:34 PM


Wow...two bright lights...forming a rainbow!
Eric

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10 posted 2003-02-18 03:41 PM


Beautiful...you two du-et so well!
So pleased I didn't miss this one!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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