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Open Poetry #25

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-17 03:18 PM

Draw

today I feel
the ocean's tide
on each shore
from side to side
so empty
yet so full
where each wave
has the pull

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-17-2003 03:19 PM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-02-17 03:21 PM

an interesting metaphor... well presented

Quiet Acquiescence
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 70
somewhere out here

2 posted 2003-02-17 03:24 PM

I love poems about nature. I take them and see how they form a picture of my life.

~*~me~*~

"Remember, courage is wings."
~*~Heather Francis~*~

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

3 posted 2003-02-17 04:36 PM

All the waves have the strength to pull... and what those waves choose to do affects the entire ocean... wow... cool write.

Thank you for such a lovely poem.

Love,
Moca

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

4 posted 2003-02-17 04:38 PM

In the pull so dynamic your words wash into me.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-02-17 08:10 PM

Your words always ring so true...and with such beauty.
Thanks,
Eric

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