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Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

0 posted 2003-02-15 02:10 PM

Regret is a luxury
I can ill afford
my pockets are as empty
as my heart-
the place you used to be
across the sea
wicked grin & all

Forever is as unreachable
as the moon-
longing for it's glow &
the lazer light show
in the warmth of your eyes
I do miss you

Memories remain
animated for every private
view, etched in bone
lest I forget
& begin to regret-
a luxury I can ill
afford...

Sunkissed.

[This message has been edited by Sunkissed (02-15-2003 02:13 PM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-02-15 02:15 PM

"Forever is as unreachable
as the moon-
longing for it's glow"

"Memories remain
animated for every private
view, etched in bone
lest I forget
& begin to regret-"

loved these lines...

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

2 posted 2003-02-15 02:19 PM

Thank you, SEA.

Sunkissed.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-02-15 02:23 PM

Sunkissed - beautiful write. Those memories. At times I wonder about them...

BC

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

4 posted 2003-02-15 02:29 PM

I wonder still...

Thank you, Bill.

Sunkissed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-15 06:12 PM

you and me both....sigh

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

6 posted 2003-02-15 06:17 PM

I LOVE the last stanza...Beautiful!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

7 posted 2003-02-15 06:57 PM

Thank you Passing Shadows and Koko.

Sunkissed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-02-15 08:25 PM

Sunkissed, I enjoyed reading this....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-02-16 02:23 PM

My pocket's not that deep,
either...

very good, Sunkissed...

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-02-16 02:25 PM

Ahhh.. very beautiful poem. Enoyed every word.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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