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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-02-15 02:02 PM



You reached past the ache
and held me
in wishes from yesterday
dumbfounded
I wondered how it is
that you knew
how it could be
that along some plane
we remain
connected
then I laugh softly
and tell myself
...it’s because
I never let you go......



~SEA~


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1 posted 2003-02-15 02:22 PM


"You reached past the ache
and held me
in wishes from yesterday
dumbfounded
I wondered how it is
that you knew
how it could be
that along some plane
we remain
connected
then I laugh softly
and tell myself
...it’s because
I never let you go......"


Inhaled every line!

Lovely writing.

Sunkissed.



Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-02-15 02:24 PM


SEA - your words always filled with meaning...

BC

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3 posted 2003-02-15 02:51 PM


'that along some plane
we remain
connected
then I laugh softly
and tell myself
...it’s because
I never let you go......'

I love it when ya do that!  

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4 posted 2003-02-15 03:02 PM


Oh!  Very wonderful write.  Very sweet indeed.  
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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5 posted 2003-02-15 03:05 PM


Susan, you really do put feelings into words.....
sometimes I can't figure out if they're your personal
feelings, or not, but that's what makes a really good
writer. And that you certainly are, my friend.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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6 posted 2003-02-15 05:07 PM


You reached past the ache
and held me
in wishes from yesterday
=========================
how it could be
that along some plane
we remain
connected
====================
...it’s because
I never let you go......

===========================


tis the way of the moth...
somethings never leave us...
somethings never should ...................


(why ask why)

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7 posted 2003-02-15 05:17 PM


Sea, some things are just understood.   Why is this not submitted I am trying to find the vote button and there isn't one, DUH

       
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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8 posted 2003-02-15 06:19 PM


I always enjoy reading you
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9 posted 2003-02-15 07:04 PM


My goodness.. I really liked this.. I can relate to it so well, and I'm sure most people can. We've all had trouble letting go of people, and although that person can reach out to you in kindness, that reminder of what was can still hurt. Thanks for sharing!

Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ

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10 posted 2003-02-15 07:26 PM


Wow...this is simply beautiful.
Eric

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11 posted 2003-02-16 12:26 PM


susan~

this was a beautiful write, as always.
and it's true, some things remain forever.
some connections last forever...

take care.
hugs.
amy

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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12 posted 2003-02-16 12:53 PM




(smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may love always fold you in wings of faithfulness and be the wind beneath your own! (kiss on cheek) This is graceful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank youn for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 2003-02-16 12:59 PM


beautifully expressed ,I can relate almost
although ocean apart , we remain connected heart to heart

Hope

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14 posted 2003-02-16 01:56 AM


Beautiful Sea i know this feeling well, have a friend who while we part we always meet up again and pick up where we left
Kethry
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15 posted 2003-02-16 06:44 AM


SEA,
you are very connected to your emotions and there is an emotional tug in this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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16 posted 2003-02-16 01:52 PM


connections are sometime so hard to explain to those that are not part of them...but here, you at least let the reader glimpse a part of the feeling and a part of the reason connections can leave us with...

nice work SEA... and glad to see you posting..always enjoy your words...


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17 posted 2003-02-16 01:57 PM


WOW!!  Love this Susan...
Wonderful, with a fantastic ending!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Connel
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18 posted 2003-02-16 02:34 PM


This is a good poem... But it seems as if Ive read it before.. =/

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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19 posted 2003-02-16 03:55 PM


Beautiful as always Sea



Charisma

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20 posted 2003-02-17 02:47 PM


Interesting...some we can't wait to let go and some we never want to let go...James
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21 posted 2003-02-17 02:49 PM



Well, this one raised the shivers...

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22 posted 2003-02-17 02:53 PM


I believe you told me once..you didn't think others were too interested in what you shared here.... I think I told you differently... I love it when I am right.
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23 posted 2003-02-17 03:29 PM


beautiful as always!
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24 posted 2003-02-17 04:34 PM


What a beautiful thought from a talented person for your words are always blessed.
carol
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25 posted 2003-02-17 06:39 PM


SEA, this is really nice

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

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