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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-15 12:32 PM



Leap Space

distance
you think
is miles
it’s not
it’s much
further than
that

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


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passing shadows
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sellout007
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2 posted 2003-02-15 02:50 PM


You have a wonderful way of saying volumes with the most minimal of words. Talent that is!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2003-02-15 08:13 PM


This is the truth.
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4 posted 2003-02-16 01:42 PM


yes sometimes it is... sometimes it is not the miles it is the emotional distance and the past pains we can't seem to escape..

enjoyed..short..and to the point.
good work as always..

bslicker
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state of mind
5 posted 2003-02-20 11:11 AM


closer than one would think
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