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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity

0 posted 2003-02-15 12:16 PM


Waves of silence


We ascend among
particles of Love
of blue and gold,
drawn like magnets
to heights untold.

You and me
drops of water,
sprinkled into the
night sky by jets
born in the sea.

Our smiles
sparkles of light,
touching in awe,
releasing love
to lonely hearts.

Our souls embracing
on waves of silence,
twirling spheres,
sharing whispers
of pure delight.

You and me
dancing stars,
pointing to distant
pools of  treasures,
on the paths of eternity.


Love, Margherita

© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-02-15 12:40 PM


what a beautiful picture you paint of sea and sky and love
VAS
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2 posted 2003-02-15 12:48 PM


softly, sweetly romantic

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-02-15 12:55 PM


Margherita - I like your soft prose...

BC

sellout007
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4 posted 2003-02-15 05:59 PM


"We ascend among
particles of Love
of blue and gold,
drawn like magnets
to heights untold."

MMM gives me the warm fuzzies thinking about that.

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-15 06:10 PM




(smiles) Oh Margherita, this is lovely, sweet friend, such beautiful peace and comfort fills these gorgeous words, yay, I love it! (kiss on cheek) Your splendid words are always like a big warm hug, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ericc
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6 posted 2003-02-15 07:27 PM


Your heart knows the story of love so well...and you share it so beautifuly.
Love,
Eric

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-02-15 07:42 PM


Margherita, this is beautiful...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

vandana
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8 posted 2003-02-15 07:48 PM


beautiful
SmartChick
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9 posted 2003-02-15 08:01 PM


This is just beautiful.
Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13
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Queens NY
10 posted 2003-02-15 08:15 PM


Your words must sing to his heart, such sweet melodies!!

"Our souls embracing
on waves of silence,
twirling spheres,
sharing whispers
of pure delight."

AWESOME

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
11 posted 2003-02-18 06:10 PM


Lovely...James
Quiet Acquiescence
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12 posted 2003-02-18 07:05 PM


Awww. As everyone said, it's simply "lovely".

~*~Courage is wings~*~

Laverne Pacquire
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13 posted 2010-03-21 05:38 PM


romantic poem about you and a loved one in silence.  how intimate and romantic.


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