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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-02-15 10:19 AM


“TO BE FILLED AGAIN”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When I asked for
your hand,
and you said yes,
my mind suddenly
became empty, only
to be filled again,
with you...
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Robert Frazier
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1 posted 2003-02-15 10:22 AM


..."sigh!"  Love will do that to you!

Rf

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2 posted 2003-02-15 10:40 AM


This is so lovely!
Excellent!
Eric

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3 posted 2003-02-15 10:42 AM


Love the simple innocence of this BC!
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4 posted 2003-02-15 12:10 PM


Very beautiful!
Margherita

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5 posted 2003-02-15 12:41 PM


sweet
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6 posted 2003-02-15 12:56 PM


this brought a chuckle. thanks!
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7 posted 2003-02-15 01:54 PM


Beautiful...


Sunkissed.

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8 posted 2003-02-15 01:56 PM


BC..romantic as ever...
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9 posted 2003-02-15 05:37 PM




(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as this poem gently is like taking ones hand and dancing with that special sweetheart! (big huggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2003-02-15 07:23 PM


Bill...You do this so well. Enjoyed ...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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11 posted 2003-02-15 07:49 PM


enjoyed
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12 posted 2003-02-15 07:55 PM


Bill, short and sweet...and romantic....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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13 posted 2003-02-15 08:16 PM


WOW!!! One can say so much with so little words. Thank you sir, for the lesson. This was beautiful!
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14 posted 2003-03-03 09:46 PM


A youthfully grown-up poem -- and one of the gems I am finding tonight by reading the Forum from oldest to youngest, so I get another chance at good things I missed.

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15 posted 2003-03-03 09:48 PM


happy sigh here... this is sensitive, touching, beautful!

Always, Alyssa

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     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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16 posted 2003-03-03 10:37 PM



oooooooohhhhhhhh

aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

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17 posted 2003-03-03 10:56 PM


See what I mean, folks? Good stuff gets bypassed allatime. I can't pull it all to the top again, but I'm going to be playing submarine down there looking for things like this......

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