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Open Poetry #25

Don't fear obsession

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

0 posted 2003-02-15 04:59 AM

I harbor
only the fantasy
of a smile unseen
and of lips untasted
beyond that
is Gods will

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-02-15 07:45 AM

Yes...obsessions can be the only thing on which we balance our dreams! Great writing, and I especially appreciate your Critique slogan!!!! Let's here it for all poets who need to eat!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2003-02-15 01:17 PM

an interesting snippet, almost a maxim.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-15 01:28 PM

Very interesting poem...I like it though

Cold hands means a warm heart

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