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DonFurr
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0 posted 2003-02-15 04:44 AM



hope still drifts
even when the stream
is submerged
you never lose
what is cherished
in your soul
you couldn't
let go of it
even if you
knew how

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-02-15 04:46 AM


very good! well done, once again!
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2003-02-15 07:52 AM


Well...you have a great talent, and it's a pleasure to read. Looking forward to the next writings from your pen, (or keyboard!)

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

Kethry
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3 posted 2003-02-16 04:27 AM


good musing, letting go is the hardest thing to do.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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4 posted 2003-02-16 06:29 PM




(smiles) Oh Don, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you speak of such soft wisdom that all our children will be blessed to hold deep to their hearts, God Bless You, this has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Don, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-02-17 09:53 AM


You wrote on two of my favorite "H" words--hope & harmony---and very well at that!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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6 posted 2003-02-17 09:55 AM


beautiful..........

~~ Connie ~~

Chanson
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7 posted 2003-02-19 12:26 PM


Short and sweet. *s
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8 posted 2003-02-19 12:46 PM


letting go.. always a difficult thing.

enjoyed.

Maree

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9 posted 2003-02-19 12:58 PM


You can pack a lot of meaning into a few words -- In fact, you just did....

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10 posted 2003-02-20 04:02 AM


Agree with Ratleader, and great wisdom for those who listen.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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12 posted 2003-02-21 05:36 AM


you reckon? thanks for writing this!
Enchantress
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13 posted 2003-02-21 08:48 AM


Perfect!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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14 posted 2003-02-21 09:00 AM


I love these short poems with
so much meaning. Very, very good one, I might add.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

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15 posted 2003-02-21 01:54 PM


Strength in finality.
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16 posted 2003-02-25 01:47 PM


Excellent!!!

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



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17 posted 2003-02-25 01:58 PM


What a beautiful truth......

well said.....much enjoyed!

Golden*

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18 posted 2003-02-25 04:23 PM


I really liked this. Short and powerful.
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19 posted 2003-02-27 11:14 PM


Letting go is not a trait I have learned how to do with dignity yet. Great poem

                               Dawn

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Nan
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21 posted 2003-03-01 08:09 AM


Simply insightful...
Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2003-03-01 08:16 AM


Don,
Enjoyed the read.

GG
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23 posted 2003-03-01 08:30 AM


even if you knew how... leaves me thinking, wondering.. yet sure. I like it!

Always, Alyssa

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     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Margherita
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24 posted 2003-03-01 08:56 AM


True and beautiful.
Margherita

DonFurr
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25 posted 2003-03-02 10:51 PM


Thank You All
Touched and joy-filled your responses leave me. The love of the art is surpassed only by the love the artists in this forum gift upon their peers.

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton


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