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molly_the_dolly
Junior Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 25
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-02-15 01:07 AM


a dream miles away
and no way to reach it,
the only way to accomplish so
is by net, mail and dreams.
i am in a terrible yearning.

Every night i dont sleep well
thinking of that dream,
the images in my head
further my pain,
but also ease my yearning.

the only solution is a conversation,
fake or real,
it makes little difference.
this dream is driving me into insanity,
but it is the only way to keep me happy.
God i love this dream.

My Yearning Grows stronger,
my heart pumps faster as we talk.
The day goes on,
my dream stays still
and the dream is,
that some day i could be with you.



© Copyright 2003 Ms Amanda - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-02-15 02:46 AM


and my friend, I can honestly say that those dreams can turn into the most beautiful reality, if we but hold onto them!  This is wonderful, and I'm glad you included the net, as many dreams are realised there.  Also, nice to meet you, and hope to read your thoughts on many more occasions!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-02-15 03:21 AM


good write, nice to read.
sellout007
Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL
3 posted 2003-02-15 02:21 PM


Oh this touches home. Been there and feel your pain. o(

Added to the libary it is.

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-02-15 02:27 PM


molly_the_dolly - those miles drive me within at times, I see you have some of the same feelings, nice write about it...

BC

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
5 posted 2003-04-26 05:18 AM


I feel the pain!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*

Love Always,
Marrie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2003-08-10 02:06 AM


I wrote this poem for myself, as well as others who feel the same pain as me.

Thank you
Molly

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