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Albert J. Allie
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0 posted 2003-02-14 10:47 PM


A song to sing within my heart
A song I sing of love.
Inspiration brings it forth,
Of a sweet white winged dove.
Words have tender meaning,
The music played upon my breath.
I sing a song
An ode I chant,
Because with you,
I have been blessed.

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-14 11:26 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-14 11:56 PM












(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it!!! (big hugggsssssss) May the dove of your heart croon a rhapsody of new arpeggios you can recite, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton










"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albert J. Allie
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3 posted 2003-02-14 11:57 PM


THANK YOU SIR NOAH!!!!!!!!
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2003-02-15 03:01 AM


Yes, as a musician, I would say that this is a special song of love, with a melody all it's own.  Loved it, AJA!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-02-15 03:33 AM


nice write, simple but powerful
Albert J. Allie
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6 posted 2003-02-15 10:09 AM


And once I again I thank you for your kind words. My heart speaks in many different ways.
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-02-15 10:22 AM


Albert - a song sung, I like your music...

BC

Albert J. Allie
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8 posted 2003-02-15 07:48 PM


Thank you Charles!!! I hope I can sing many others that could make your day brighter!
KoKo
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9 posted 2003-02-15 09:06 PM


Aaaw that was so sweet!!! The flow in your writing is entrancing!! VERY well written!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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