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Albert J. Allie
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0 posted 2003-02-14 10:43 PM


Amongst beauty walks no other,
But her name which I speak humbly.
Not stars, nor sun, nor moon,
Could shine so.
For luminous are the rays,
Created by the smile she wears.
Accomplished hands leaves one
Breathless with each touch.
I stand nervously, In the sight of
God's perfection,
But give into Her willingly
And swear to stand at Her side,
Until eternity passes thrice.
My dedication
Is endless.

© Copyright 2003 Albert J. Allie - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-14 11:25 PM


How romantic. I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Albert J. Allie
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2 posted 2003-02-14 11:27 PM


Thank you sweet Loner!!
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3 posted 2003-02-14 11:45 PM












(smiles) Oh Albert, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may your fairst love always embrace with you in eternal harmony! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton










"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albert J. Allie
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4 posted 2003-02-14 11:47 PM


Yes Noah I know it will happen. THANK YOU
Sunnyone
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5 posted 2003-02-15 03:03 AM


Albert, I have just discovered that you are a wonderfully romantic poet!!!  Your writings are touching and inviting, and I hope that your collections never end!!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-02-15 03:30 AM


very touching
Albert J. Allie
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7 posted 2003-02-15 10:06 AM


Thank you Sunny. I shall pen on!! Thank you passing!
sellout007
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8 posted 2003-02-15 02:36 PM


It would be a bueatiful world if we all just had someone that cared for us like that.

Wonderful that was!~

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

Albert J. Allie
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9 posted 2003-02-15 07:46 PM


Thank you sellout! And indeed the world WOULD be beautiful if everyone cared for eachother in that speacial way!!
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10 posted 2003-02-15 09:08 PM


I don't know what I can say what the others have not already said...But you are a wonderful writer and I can't wait to read more of your work!!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Albert J. Allie
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11 posted 2003-02-15 09:10 PM


Thank you again koko...I am still blushing...

:-)

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12 posted 2003-02-15 09:37 PM


Albert, this is very beautiful.
I love it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Albert J. Allie
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13 posted 2003-02-15 10:04 PM


thank you garys!! that means a lot to me!!
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