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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2003-02-14 09:04 PM



over the sky,
to a blind heart,
never seen,
where sunrise
and sunset
run free
through this dream,
fascination's
sensation,
running wild
imagination,
sweet jubilation,
one toke past,
glorious
intoxication
  

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-14 09:39 PM


very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2003-02-14 10:08 PM


Yes, and this was truly intoxicating!! I enjoyed the pace here, as it started my mind moving from the very beginning...Great write!

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-02-15 03:22 AM



BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-02-15 03:51 AM


Pour it on Inky~  
Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 610

5 posted 2003-02-15 01:59 PM


I always enjoy poetry that soars with emotion.

Well done.
Sunkissed.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2003-02-15 02:41 PM


inkedgoddess - glorious intoxication, love those two words...

BC

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
7 posted 2003-02-15 08:01 PM


That was really nice and clean too....refereshing! Hope you had a nice holiday
Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 512
Queens NY
8 posted 2003-02-15 08:18 PM


I believe this is my first read of yours. I look forward to much much more!! This was simply beautiful!
garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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Florida, USA
9 posted 2003-02-15 08:39 PM


Michele, I liked this......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
10 posted 2003-02-15 10:45 PM


one toke over the line sweet jesus
one toke over the line

Shadowed_Innersense
Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49
somewhere at the edge
11 posted 2003-02-24 02:12 PM


Fascinating!!!
   ... need more, got the munchies now.

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