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The Faith Of My Fingers
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The Faith Of My Fingers |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And I am lead by the promise of a touch...the faith of my fingers leading the blind. The infinite stretches in all directions, and still...I find the space you fill. I trace the curve Of you back To heaven - I knock at God's door. And you answer. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh Myyy Eric! This is so beautiful! So much said in so few words. Well done! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ericc - very nicely written... BC |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ericc, I love this!! The last line is a wonderful and perfect ending to such a great piece! A truly happy person is one who |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Makes me catch my breath. Soooo beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'The infinite stretches in all directions, and still...I find the space you fill.' Great line Ericc, love the title and smooth, easy feel of this write. |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
"I trace the curve Of you back To heaven - I knock at God's door. And you answer." That was an awesome write! So simple yet speaks volumes!! OOo goose bumps! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, absolutely beautiful.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Such sweetness, such love, so eloquently captured within your words. You are magic. Thank you for such amazing beauty. Love, Moca |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh yes!!!! I like!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* You're melting us again, Eric. Please don't stop. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc - ok I lied - I clicked you on again - this is the best one so far - amazingly beautiful - just lovely . . . xxoo |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
simply beautiful  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, thank goodness for Ruth... I almost missed this gem! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Wow, you are excellent. Enjoy your work very original and refreshing. Look forward to more. SG |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Beautiful... Sunkissed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ This is just remarkable~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
wow - amazing - very visual & a beautiful write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just awesome! |
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