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Albert J. Allie
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0 posted 2003-02-14 07:46 PM


Fluttered wings,
Lift love to Heavens skies.
Morning sings another,
Of her praises to you.
Awake myself in beauty's
Presence and kiss the air.
Daisies bend to peer,
In hopes to catch a glimpse,
Of you.
Natures loviest, scene.
Every of your breath,
Breathes life into every
Living thing.
The fragrance of your soul,
Rises and gives inspiration,
To the morning bird's song.
Age cannot touch you,
For you are timeless
And pure

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-02-14 07:50 PM


Very very lovely...much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Albert J. Allie
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2 posted 2003-02-14 07:54 PM


THANK YOU NANCY
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3 posted 2003-02-14 08:07 PM












(smiles) Oh Albert, this is just gorgeous, sweet friend, you always write such angelic verse, yay, I love it, this is one bound for the library classics, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton












"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albert J. Allie
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4 posted 2003-02-14 08:20 PM


:-)

Thank you Noah!!

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-02-14 08:22 PM


Albert - timeless this is, lovingly written from your pen...

BC

Albert J. Allie
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6 posted 2003-02-14 08:24 PM


Thank you Bill! From my pen to yours my friend!!
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7 posted 2003-02-14 08:51 PM


Hi Albert, this is my first read of yours, I love it!
Sandra

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8 posted 2003-02-14 10:16 PM


Albert, this is magnificent and it touches my heart, yes it does.  I especially like the
last three lines, where 'age cannot touch you'...I hope to read much more from you, as it is a pleasure.

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

Albert J. Allie
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9 posted 2003-02-14 10:29 PM


Thank you Sandra and sunny. I look forward to reading YOUR work as well. I am glad I could touch your heart!!
passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-02-15 04:47 AM


what a world you see through you eyes and a picture you paint with your heart!
abbe
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11 posted 2003-02-15 08:27 AM


thank you for your beautiful words and these especially make my day

The fragrance of your soul,
Rises and gives inspiration,
To the morning bird's song.
Age cannot touch you,
For you are timeless
And pure

with hair tinged gray, i like to feel ageless and glad to connect with the pure beauty of your words...

so, off i go... to greet my timed day in timeless goodness.  sweet.  blessings to you.

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2003-02-15 08:39 AM


Albert your words are indeed timeless.
Very beautiful writing.

Albert J. Allie
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13 posted 2003-02-15 10:03 AM


THANK YOU GENTLE!!!!!!!
Albert J. Allie
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14 posted 2003-02-15 10:05 AM


Thank you Passing and abbe. As beauty is in the eyes if it's beholder, so is it timeless. in their eyes as well....
Margherita
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15 posted 2003-02-15 11:40 AM


"Daisies bend to peer,
In hopes to catch a glimpse,
Of you."

Love gives life to everything. So beautiful!
Margherita

Albert J. Allie
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16 posted 2003-02-15 07:47 PM


I truely believe as you have said Magherita! Love gives life to EVERY living thing. Thank you!
Fauxreal
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17 posted 2003-02-20 01:45 PM


WOW!
Albert J. Allie
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18 posted 2003-02-20 06:35 PM


Thank you Fauxreal!!!!!!!!!
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