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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-02-14 06:15 PM



That distant expression
she’s somewhere I can’t see
tell me where’s she gone
can you bring her back to me?

Can you help me,
I don’t know what to do
no, she’s gone
to a deeper shade of blue


she’s found a new horizon
her heart is traced in sand and foam
her soul is forever changed,
she’s found home

there is nothing you can do
it was simply meant to be
let her go....
She belongs to the sea......


~SEA~


© Copyright 2003 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 2003-02-14 06:20 PM


How wonderful that the first poem in open 25 would be for Janet Marie. THis is beautifully written and I know will be much appreciated.
Liz

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2 posted 2003-02-14 07:07 PM


Very heartfelt and beautifully written.

Deb

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3 posted 2003-02-14 07:18 PM


How beautiful...and how JM loves the sea.
Beautifully done Susan...
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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4 posted 2003-02-14 07:46 PM


Oh wow...this is lovely.
Eric

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5 posted 2003-02-14 07:55 PM




Im sooo happy you posted this one..now I can have it in me mothy library...
thank you Susan..very much...seeing the ocean has changed the way I look at everything..it was the most amazing thing Ive ever felt...standing by the waves for the first time...walking in the tides barefoot...seeing the colors of the sunrise
reflecting on the surf...
THANK YOU to Mark for showing a moth the bluest of the blue


thanks for sharing your words with me Sea-girlie


      
" ... and I never saw blue like that before."

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(smiles) Oh Susan, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as Janet is such a special friend to us all and so deserving of this special gossamer wing-lighting gift! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You Both, sweet friend, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing, and you and Janet both have a...



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton










"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-02-14 08:23 PM


enjoyed
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-02-14 08:27 PM


SEA - precious is your write for Janet Marie...

BC

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9 posted 2003-02-14 10:28 PM


SEA, no better tribute could be paid to such a great lady than what you have written here in these picturesque words.  Wonderful!!

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

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10 posted 2003-02-14 11:03 PM


Sea, this is such a beautiful tribute to
a beautiful and sweet Lady. Janet Marie
is such a sweet and loving person, isn't she?
I can tell from her poetry and her replies.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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11 posted 2003-02-14 11:03 PM


Ah, the sea...and a couple of ladies that appreciate it as much as I do.  What can I say?  Perfect!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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12 posted 2003-02-15 04:45 AM


incredible!
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13 posted 2003-02-15 02:28 PM


enjoyed that much i did....

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

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14 posted 2003-02-15 03:53 PM


This is beautiful SEA, I think you should submit this for the book.

Maree

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15 posted 2003-02-15 04:00 PM


thanks all, I sent this to Janet first... it was for her, I'm glad she didn't mind me posting it here


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16 posted 2003-02-16 01:49 PM


a beautiful offering to a friend...

Sea you captured well the way sometimes we never look at life in the same way..

nicely done...

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