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Huan Yi
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since 10-12-2004
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Waukegan


0 posted 04-24-2007 07:19 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi

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In the war
And in those before
No soldier ever died
Squealing like a pig

It was shot in the head
There was no pain
At least thatís what was said
To the family back home

Yet since weíve learned
That that was wrong
To keep from doing
Further harm

Let us try to fill you in
On the matter of the porno
We found in his locker


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Drauntz
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since 03-16-2007
Posts 2907
Los Angeles California


1 posted 04-24-2007 11:03 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

it is only today
I wished you a wonderful day
now you get into angry
which will ruin your dream, sir.

a very good poem but it will be better if your anger has released through it. otherwise, write
more.

what a truth!
 
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