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vandana
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0 posted 2002-04-07 10:26 AM


Once there was love
In my life,
Once there was a heart
Once there was a love
Once there was a heart,
A heart would fall hard
In love,
Once there used to be a rain
That used to fall hard
enough on us
We used to laughed and cried
Once there was love
That would never die
And break
Now It Is seems
like It Is all gone and done,

Once,
Once there was everything,
I used to feel loved,
Now I don't feel love
Because now everything
I had,
I had lost everything
In time,
Once there was you,
came Into my life,
Once there was a heart
A heart that would never break,
And would loved
In this whole world
Now It Is seems like
everything that came
on my way,
Now It's gone
And it's over
Everything that was
In my life
Once there was everything....

[This message has been edited by vandana (04-07-2002 10:29 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-07 11:10 AM


Vandana,
Such a touching poem! I loved it's truth and intensity. Once there was everything...and then there will be a day...a time where there will always be everything..all that you want.
Keep writing!
Neha

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2 posted 2002-04-07 11:46 AM




(smiles) This is so very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope this feeling no longer relates to you and now love fills your heart and will last forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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