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jennie may*
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0 posted 2002-04-07 01:32 AM


three years
I'm still reminded
here and there
of an angel who
held me
   just for a short while
an angel with those brown eyes
those eyes that
gave his soul to me

that surrendered me


what a light he had

         how it brought my heart
         to flight
           up to the sky
           and back to his warm arms


how soon I would have taken you
for mine
for the rest of this life...


  I lost my angel wings
  

I fell to the earth
when he was gone

     how swift I left my heaven
        those dark eyes
        that delicate once in a lifetime...


three years


I have another that I love very much now
        a new life
        a repaired girl in me


but every one in a while
I see
brown eyes
and remember the days
the endless sunshine
            when I loved you

"We have all these galaxies inside of us.  And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard

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1 posted 2002-04-07 03:22 AM


Nice...James
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2 posted 2002-04-07 11:49 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, a tear came to my eye reading this knowing how you feel and for how happy you hold both your memories and the new love you found close! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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