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Corinne
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state of confusion

0 posted 2002-04-06 06:04 PM



A Distant Ring

When we speak on the phone now,
topics are not stained
in sepia-toned nostalgia,
of beach days
when I was the better body surfer,
or that day when you could
finally outrun me.

Instead,
we speak through thickened air,
of your latest find in sugar-free fudgesicles,
on the challenges of dining out
with diabetes;
and of the permanent hangover
from the drug meant to interfere
with your chronic liver disease.

I feel guilt
crawling up from my toes.
I let too much time pass
between calls.
I don’t like to see
the future without you,
Brother.

© 2002 Corinne Bailey


© Copyright 2002 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2002-04-06 06:37 PM


This is powerfully sad....time goes by so quickly and I have no idea how things change so fast. Well done.

~sky

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2 posted 2002-04-06 07:14 PM




(sigh) This is sad but true, sweet friend, time does have a tendency to slip by quickly and I would give anything to spend it with those I love most of all and never have to fear this again! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-04-06 09:00 PM


Corinne - a most powerful write. Done with passion inside, just written with a love that can be felt when reading this...

BC

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