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To The Heart |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Can you see past the river where the torn ground spits out the sound that eases doubt, and tremble of leaves is only fear, and perhaps deer, a place unnamed where one sits and talks to the start? It would appear that no one is here to listen to heart that fills up each day with high octane and roars around the glitter pushing aside the chaos until there is road that takes the lonely away from day. The banter of lips are torn from touching heat so often, until blistered they part and drink from this place where beginning is so cool and the wash of life catches a callus that came from too much fool. Too much filling up and letting out and filling again rubbed in and all that is left is to be here taking a breath and maybe asking a question and listening as the sky quiets and the trees stop tremble, to the heart. [This message has been edited by Martie (04-06-2002 03:26 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It would appear that no one is here to listen to heart that fills up each day with high octane and roars around the glitter pushing aside the chaos until there is road that takes the lonely away from day. Such beautiful words...always, Martie  ~many weekend hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Martie: tranquility such as this comes straight from the heart when confusion and goodness torn asunder, they part listen carefully, to each beat it does give For when it is silent, do we all cease to live WonderfulWonderfulWonderful, Martie! tSR |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Martie, you've written an excellent and meaningful piece here! Bravo! ::::Applause:::: Love, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang, girl....just when I think I'm catching up to you, you hopscotch ahead by a whole game.... |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~I will sip from this many times Martie, your writing is so incredible, such an important part of my passions experience,...thank you. *Peace. |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
I wish I'd said what Alicia just did... so: echo, Martie. This is different from your others... thinking... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may we always take everything to the heart and feel the beauty of spring grace us all! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie..amazed by the words...love the presentation....cherish the poetess! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Martie...James |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Martie, I see droves of weekenders rushing to fill their high octane tanks..and leading empty lives, through this poem..their exodus is well described  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-07-2002 11:30 AM).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
martie, beautiful writing from your pen as always. your meaning here is just so lovely...you make me smile take care friend! amy "you can't stop |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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