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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I don’t want to think I don’t want to feel even good things there is no right side to get out of this bed they must think me weak only I know the will that stopped the break till now I’m tired I need to sleep alone |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmm, I was just thinking the same thing..how very tired I am..but the sleeping alone thing....I would welcome the opportunity to not be alone..*s M |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It must be cold out on that porch, Duncan... a real cute write  ~hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) I can feel a little sadness behind these words, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright and all you want is just a nice peaceful rest to get the day started! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thanks all...the porch is warm. It's the rest of the world that chills. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, That seems to sum it up pretty good. Enjoyed |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sleep ALONE?! can't be done..... ....can it?!  ok, sometimes, but not very often...*hugs* Cowboy  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You know what is strange? I know exactly what you're talking about here. Needing to sleep alone. I wouldn't know any other way of writing about it than this. enjoyed. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~You know, I felt the cold ache of the outside in this,...how the reality hurts so much it calls for crawling and curling,...glad your porch is warm. *S*. *Peace. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
they must think me weak only I know the will that stopped the break till now I'm tired I need to sleep alone ======================== not weak D-babes....its just that sometimes we give too much of ourselves away... once again your words of less, say so much more..and hit home in places deep. I know tired...you need a vacation ... or some company on that porch *S* Im thinking you need the number of my moth travel agent how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
JM Didn't I ask you not to make me smile when I've put all this time and effort into a pity party? Geez...some moths! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
HEY Everybody!! A 'porch pity party' at Duncan's house!! Right now...let's go! Good write Duncan....I know the feeling. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - I'm tired also my friend, I need to be alone for now also... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like the line about no right side to get out of this bed. I have felt that way many times. Good write, Duncan. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
555-moth ask for the pretty blue flame discount... one way....porch to porch (if your smiling then Im smiling) *L* |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, I'm with SEA, sleep alone...really? Not this boy. But I could do the porch alone. Very well expressed sentiments. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Okay, let’s sit out on the porch where it’s warm then. Grab me a beer on your way out will ya? Waddya mean I was supposed to bring the beer? And sympathy too??? Don’t ask for much do you??? Rofl If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Does Duncan want us all to mourn 'till morn with him? Then we'll catch him laughing over Krispy Cremes and a Latte on the porch swing. But I do like this mournful tune. I almost got up to get you a blankie. You are good....really good. And JM's reply is tooo funny. What happened when you dialed that M number? Hugs and mugs of warm cheer to you. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, Ya know, I'm starting to think you really are able to read minds. Once again, you have penned exactly what I think and feel. How do you do that???? I can REALLY relate to this right now. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
hi. welcome to the last 18 months of my life... "they must think me weak only I know the will that stopped the break till now" sighness. exactly, duncan. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Duncan, we all feel like that when we love  |
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