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Kissed by a Fool
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Kissed by a Fool |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I was kissed by a fool contagious love melting upon my lips dripping sweet passion forbidden sinking into by being etched upon my heart breathless feelings wandering lost within wistful dreams drowning in teardrops splashed upon a wilderness of dormant buds scented with promises of what could have been and foolish thoughts of If and maybes' "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) [This message has been edited by Victoria (04-06-2002 11:32 AM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
WOW, Victoria....I wish I had penned this beauty! You have so much wonderful imagery flowing down the page, amazing!  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
scented with promises of what could have been and foolish thoughts of If and maybes' This is a lovely poem, Victoria...but I often wonder if the "if and maybes" aren't the better answer than what really happened...thats just some food for thought I really loved your poem  ~lots of thoughtful hugggsss~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
scented with promises of what could have been and foolish thoughts of If and maybes' But still, ya gotta love it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
contagious love ..love it!! those if's and maybe's..and even perhaps..can get you every time... I get tired of them myself.. hugsss M |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hey Victoria, at least you got kissed. lol...well serious now, these lines in the poem were so awesome, I didnt know what to hilight, so I will tell you, I just loved them all. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so lovely, sweet friend, I think when we all first fall in love we always tend to think it is so foolish you just don't believe it, but yet you keep following your hearts desires and eventually trip on true love in serendipity! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - now that had to be one heck of a kiss! BC |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Victoria...EXCELLENT EXPRESSION!!! The kiss of a fool is like no other. It brings its own pain, its own guilt. What could have been...an incomplete thought. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah beautiful penned.....love it Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, Excellent write, enjoyed. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Not by the lips of imagination's fool nor by the hands of another by our heart, does it rule Save a thought keep it always For it is yours and yours alone May you always have dreams in your soul, Vic, they are home ~sigh-times for all~ What a wonderful writer you are, Vic. wow Jeff |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much..nice to hear from everyone...hope you have a great weekend.. hugss to all  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Same here, and you said it well. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ Lovely thoughts... Great Images....Lauren~ Step through the |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sandra and lauren...nice of you to peek in ..hugsss ~Victoria |
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