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haydenjames
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0 posted 2002-04-06 08:38 AM


take on life part 2

sometimes we ignore our true feelings,
maybe it’s when we can’t handle the truth.

don’t think to much about tomorrow,
because you may not give enough attention to today.

the most confusing persons in life are sometimes the ones loved most.
and the ones loved most are usually just as confused about us.

there’s usually one thing in life that’s always important,
you just need to figure out what that one thing really is.

they say behind every dark cloud there’s a silver lining.
but just beyond that dark cloud there’s usually yes… a darker cloud,
so why cloud hop when dark clouds eventually turn white anyway?

love isn’t always about who sparks our interest.
but we should be keener about finding smoke than sparks.

never accept the offer from people to make your choices for you,
for these people will and can never offer to suffer the disappointment after.

If you never try or refuse to experience some thing in life unknown to you,
It doesn’t matter really. At least if it doesn’t bother you that you’ll just never know.

This is part 2 and the end of my take on life,
For when too many words are written it's less likely they'll remain pure.

©2002 hayden a. james

If interested part 1 can be found here: http://www.thehayden.org

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-04-06 08:48 AM


haydenjames,
A good write, enjoyed the read.

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2 posted 2002-04-06 07:49 PM




BRAVO!!! This is an excellent take on life, sweet friend, yes, I too think it is our own decisions and feelings that shape our hearts, and it is wrong to determine each others decisions and we should pay attention to those that respect our decisions in love! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-04-06 08:23 PM


Interesting thoughts...James
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