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{{{ The bleeding rose }}}
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{{{ The bleeding rose }}} |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
 ~*~ The bleeding rose ~*~ A rose lost in time Somewhere in folds of mystery so sublime She trembled as the waves of time Crushed her day by day What could a fragile rose say? When her heart bleeds everyday When all the world wounds her always By all what it does or says Can she close her eyes And not see This bloody terrible sea? Can she pretend not to shed tears? Not to tremble with fears? In front of this world that kills As it brought hell up to her cell Yes… She bleeds And silently watch the pools of blood Growing larger day by day She tries to wipe them away But…. Whenever she wipes away atear A drop of blood She finds more than what her small hands could wipe away And… Now Left bleeding in this cruel time I wonder for how long Would she stand Before she loses her breath In your hand And only then you might see How fragile a rose could be When never understood Never embraced Tenderly Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
everyone needs love and to be understood, and to be held tenderly...I've bled my share...nice poem, very sad. I love the sad ones. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
most fragile indeed my friend. . . sad and heartfelt. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
what a beautiful lines u wrote my dear Em such beauty that no one can say but.. excellent ... fabulous& outstanding poem but hey ......... remember.. that fargile rose won't be alone nor can weap again or bleed ........ as sh'ell be protected from woe when she'll find someone( a male rose )who will sacrifice his own life in order to see her bloom once again....& to smell her magical fragrance.. filled over the whole world welldone my dear......as usual. u r making me stuned wheneve I see such miracles created by the one & only Em ............two Thumbs High UP LOVE ALWAYS |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so very heartbreaking, sweet friend, I too think everyone needs someone to embrace them and share sweet, faithful love in life, for without it we are indeed bleeding and no one can ever teach us how to cope and convince us that such a beauty exists that is insatiable! (sigh) My heart cries out to everyone who feels thsi way, sweet friend, this is sad but excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~passing shadows Yes...we all have our share of bleeding , it seems. Thank you.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Sven~ Thank you my friend.... There has been so much in the world lately that one can not help but feel this way... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
a heartfelt poem  enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, Melody, this is very strong, and so applies to everything happening in the world, and in our hearts. Peace. Sandra |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~ Romeo My dearest friend... You always seem to overwhelm me with your words....& I just stand unable to truly thank you for it all. Apart from all that... "I know what you say could be true But... What if that rose bled to death and no one even knew..??" Just wondering Thank you as always ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Noah Sweet friend.... How my heart achs knowing there is so much truth in what you are saying... Thank you sweet friend as always.... Love & peace ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~vandana Thank yo for reading it ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Sandra Dearest... How my heart bleeds for all that is going on... Thank you dear lady ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh my, this is fantastic writing, and I shall put it in my library! A rose needs love and nurturing but many times a rose is neglected and walked upon. Just beautiful this poem is. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So sweet the rose that bleeds, and yet I remember that winter cannot harm it, only to bring it more beautiful in the spring. Embrace the fragile rose, and love the strength she weeps. ThisDiamond |
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