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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-04-05 11:32 AM



Color Of Ink

there is
a deeper place
than I
am now
must get
back to it
treasure lost
somehow

things you
can’t see
when standing
too close
a life
in rhyme
or was
it prose

plain white
blank pages
remind me
when I think
where did
the color flow
deeper than
this ink



© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-04-05 11:45 AM


ahhh I know this feeling well *s..you  always write so well in such short lines...a style all your own.
*s
M

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-04-05 12:54 PM


I must ponder this.  You are making me think.  
Shame on you

Verve
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3 posted 2002-04-05 12:57 PM




Nice.


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4 posted 2002-04-05 10:26 PM




(sigh) I think we can all ask ourselves these questions time and time again, sweet friend, it seems the color just appears naturally once we put it out on paper because our blood reflects the true colors of what we all really are and the love and wisdom we hold dear! (kiss on cheek) This is powerfully thought-provoking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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