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Let Me Love You
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Let Me Love You |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I’m the one who stands before you With heart open wide Look into my soul I’ve nothing to hide See all that I am My devotion in plain view Come, feel my love Let me give it to you I conceal nothing I wear no disguise My emotions are written Here, in my eyes Take that which I offer In this worship plea Come, let me love you Take it from me ~SEA~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words always make me smile, may your love always love you and bring sunshine and rainbows to your heart! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Beautiful! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, Well...if you insist!  Okay, I will. Since you put it that way how can I refuse? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
and how would one resist such an offer?????? very nicely done my friend... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There y'go.... |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Any guy who could turn down an offer like that is batty! Very nicely done! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully written Sea yes the eyes they say are the windows to the soul Hope |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
OK, I accept |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Soft, beautiful, lovely. Great romantic poem Sea, you do these with much feeling, floria Floria |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
When such love is offered as a gift, how could it not be accepted? Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan~ beautiful sentiments from your heart... this is such a gorgeous offer, i don't see how anyone could say no. wonderful writing as always my friend. take care. Amy "you can't stop |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"I conceal nothing I wear no disguise My emotions are written Here, in my eyes" As always ...you write love just beautifully... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
See all that I am My devotion in plain view Come, feel my love Let me give it to you I conceal nothing I wear no disguise My emotions are written Here, in my eyes Sometimes, it's that simple...love this, Susan! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I conceal nothing I wear no disguise My emotions are written Here, in my eyes This is the way love should truly be... Thanks for sharing it, Sue  ~lots of hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Just as it should be. This is nice, Susan. (((hugs))) me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - I'm ready, I'm yours to command... Lovely write, and a most lovely picture... BC |
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