Open Poetry #19 |
Rose Petal Heart |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Rose Petal Heart By Larry Chadwick If my heart were a rose, It could satisfy your need. And it’s scented petals, For you their aroma bleed. And if my heart were a rose, It would surely never die. Occasionally it may wilt, Or sometimes even cry. But if my heart were a rose, With love displayed so fine, All doubts removed for sure, By a long stem rose divine. April 4, 2002 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A single rose is meaningful in every way. You're all heart Larry~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Larry This was simply beautiful. Your words of love shined brilliantly and I could almost smell the beautiful fragrance of the rose. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, LOL Roses aren't even my wife's interest in flowers. But no other flower would really do for this, huh? Thanks. Sue, I could get on high on that scent! LOL Thanks. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your words always shine with such love that will always be roses to her heart! (big hugggsssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, If your heart were a rose, the rest of you would have thorns. LOL enjoyed |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Keep it up...you're casting smiles... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful. And about that dare to write a happy love poem..I am working on it Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
A single rose can speak volumes. Just the scent is worth a chapter or two sometimes. I liked your poem. Nan |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
But if my heart were a rose, With love displayed so fine, All doubts removed for sure, By a long stem rose divine. Beautiful and sensitive, Larry... ~thorny hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I love it...at first the title threw me off, I thought it was some kind of poem to me lol but i still loved it my friend as I am a fan or red roses! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'd rather have a bouquet of wildflowers...but, if not, then one single rose is just perfect... ...like this poem. Hugs. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - the way you write your heart must be a soft rose petal... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Larry, truely a bloom of a blossom. ThisDiamond |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
Larry, what a delicate write, you use the rose metaphor well |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, Hopefully...like a rose. Thanks. Sy, Nope...ain't gonna do it. Tempting but no censorship required here. Tougher than I thought though! Thanks. SN, Totally cool...I had no idea. Thanks a bunch. (or is that a dozen?) Sandra, Now I'm excited. This is way awesome. I can hardly wait. Yippee! And thanks, twice. vandana, Thank you. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nan, You are so very correct and I so totally agree. Thanks. Madame C, I got the point! ouch (just kidding) Thanks. RP, See...I didn't mean to rip you off. Too focused on the metaphor to think. Sorry. But thanks. Nancy Lee, The truth is...the closest I come to being a flower is probably a blooming idiot! Thanks. Bill, Better a soft heart than a soft mind. Thank you sir. And may I say how glad I am you're back where you belong. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
TD, It was a blooming something! Thanks. Chelsea, How very kind of you. |
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