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Mackenzie
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0 posted 2002-04-04 10:45 PM


When you spend the night with your best friend it can be very comforting, but when it becomes a habit it is so hard to stop.  You realalize that you don't want them, but you just want someone to be there with you.

Stop, don't tease me.
Wait, don't touch me.
Feelings rush in
My body tingles
I want to be near you
Well...maybe not you,
but someone.
Your always here,
so why not you?
I pull you near me
Feelings of closeness consume
Your my best friend
Of course I love you,
But this is wrong.
We are coming too close
Please stay, I need you.
Please leave, I'm just using you.
Reason and emotion are tangled
It's your fault this started,
And I hate myself for allowing it
It has to stop...soon,
but not tonight.



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-04-05 04:46 AM


yes, that is heartbreaking...
Larry C
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2 posted 2002-04-08 04:12 PM


Mackenzie,
Tough spot...well expressed.

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