Love Note (Maybe Marshas' challenge)

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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-04-04 09:34 PM

And what is next, my love
as you ride into the sunset
and I stand in tears
watching your dust kick up
while my heart fails to beat?

What next, my love
when you say you are not
any longer my love
but my heart,in absurd denial
still says you are?

Dusk falls, and a curtain of silence
pervades my air-I can't breathe
for you were my breath,
and it left with you
how long can I last without it?

What now my love
when you answer me with vaguest terms
and shallow lies
and you and I both know
you false deny?

Why must it be so, my love
when you rented my heart
and my lease is still
open, and empty
and needing you so very much...

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (04-05-2002 09:26 AM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-04-04 09:36 PM

I hate when they use vagueness...

you did a nice job on this..although a sad one
hugss
M

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-04-04 09:46 PM

Well worked, in tears of depart. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-04 09:59 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope soon the love of your dreams will sweep you off your feet and answer all your hearts desires! (kiss on cheek) This is so very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-04-04 10:06 PM

"You say you are not still my love
but my heart say still you are."
Once upon a time I grieved for a love for about two years...wanting desperately to have her back in my arms...in the meantime she simply went on with her life...found someone else and married them...I put myself through hell...but I learned a lesson...James

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2002-04-05 12:05 PM

Dang it Sandra,
You drew me in with that title. And I had such high hopes! Dashed again. I double dare you to write a love note about love that work not failed...please.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (04-05-2002 12:06 AM).]

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

6 posted 2002-04-05 01:47 PM

I know this need of which you speak. It is a very powerful one indeed.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-04-05 02:07 PM

Love notes, love nots...you write them well, Sandra.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-04-05 02:11 PM

enjoy

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

9 posted 2002-04-05 02:57 PM

Sandra, you have a fun way of saying nifty things. Could your lease possibly be transferred? Bet you could make a super deal!

((Sandra))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-04-05 03:10 PM

what next indeed my friend. . .

from your heart. . .

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