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rwood
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0 posted 2002-04-04 09:05 PM



The breeze gods were kind
I felt lovely beneath your voice
Sinking into bare lover’s carpet
Hiding inside my statue
with gazing eyes and moving fingers

You wanted everything
while I danced
around weeping cherry trees
drinking in the fountain
of your words

I loved your pen
when we connected the dots
of sun freckles

you loved the messages
my body spelled for you

some were wicked
some were love words

you read them out loud
like you always do

even the ones on the inside

you didn’t know
there were more on my tongue
just before
the messenger
ran out of time

and we were stuck there
in limbo of equinox
where only you
could speak my language


© Copyright 2002 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2002-04-04 09:10 PM


Ooh, this is so good, Regina. I just love the way you use the words, it makes it sound naughty and nice at once.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-04-04 09:15 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous wordfs always sing with music and gorgeous imagery! (kiss on cheek) May you always have wonderful inspiring strolls like these everyday and makes loves spring always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-04 09:20 PM


Ah Regina your words simply dance down the page in this piece.  Lovely, yet sensual.
Enjoyed so much this evening.
Hugs.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-04-04 09:25 PM



You do this so effortlessly...do more...

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-04-04 09:43 PM


Very nice Regina...James
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6 posted 2002-04-04 09:46 PM


The words just flow into your pen dear somy~.  This is truly wonderous use of wording and sensuality and ....just...just
fantastic....

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2002-04-04 10:03 PM


It's those special moments forever spilled in the hour glass of memories that we so like to turn over and over again and you turn them so much better than most.  I do so love the way your words taunt the reader on and then with each line tease the brain into a thoughtless wandering of calmness.  You definitely hold a golden pen and know how to fill the pages with beauty with each stroke.
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8 posted 2002-04-04 11:54 PM


Reg,
you loved the messages
my body spelled for you

Who wouldn't? Don't ever stop...I couldn't live without more of these! Bless you dear poet.

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2002-04-05 07:54 AM


trees are words there
with watching leaves
they write poems
of lovers in entwine

shall we give them books to write

enjoyed this



Cpat Hair
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10 posted 2002-04-05 08:25 AM


yes..real talent.

you never fail to amaze me with the string of images and the ways you take the reader inside the feelings.

I enjoyed..

texasrose
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11 posted 2002-04-05 08:33 AM


A beautiful use of imagery Regina.  I love your work.
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2002-04-05 08:45 AM


Regina,
You always do a dance in my mind.

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