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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-04-04 08:48 PM



Silken lines of delicate curve
Creamy flesh in scent superb
Of blossom blooms the nectar cup
Upon the breeze, the bees show up

Dainty colored romance themes
Passions stain in pastel dreams
Of softest face and perfume scent
Upon the blush amore is meant

Sweet with dew in morning sun
Bright subdue or vibrant one
A part of summer as it grows
Upon the thorn the sweet red rose

Copyright Kkh 4/5/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-04-04 09:03 PM


Ah! The sweet red rose. Very nicely penned, ThisDiamond. I love your writing! Would you like a dozen?

((ThisDozen))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-04-2002 09:04 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-04 09:28 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words glimmer with the spring and summer beauty, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is enchanting, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ShadowRider
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3 posted 2002-04-04 10:32 PM


mmmmmm
with innate rainflow
your words radiate
elucidate
illuminate the reader's imagination

just like they are supposed to do.
Such a pleasure to read you, TD.
tSR

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-04-04 10:37 PM


This diamond, your rhythm and flow are terrific. I love this so much. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-04-05 02:01 AM


I have room for this beautiful poem right in my library! You know I love this, I am a fan of roses, as you can see by my user name
Very, very pretty

Dulcinea
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6 posted 2002-04-05 11:50 AM


Now that was the most romantic piece I have seen in a long while, very nicely done TD!

Quotation, n: The act of repeating erroneously the words of another.
- Ambrose Bierce

Victoria
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7 posted 2002-04-05 01:39 PM


Lovely words Kathleen..beautifully done

              ~Victoria


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-04-05 01:45 PM


Happy to share with all of you. Thank you for the encouragements and smiles. ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2002-04-05 02:17 PM


nice write
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