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haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14
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Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-04-04 08:15 PM


Sometimes the most remembered moments in life... are the ones most easily forgotten. I give light to my memory of...

ten steps

one. closer to the unknown, me.
two. deeper stilling waves, hello.

three. cry of healing patterns, seen.
four. whispering inside pleasantries, you.

five. nobody relates the melodies, footsteps.
six. made genteel by you muted, motion.

seven. beyond these ten steps, days.
eight. walking the boulevard of friendship, dreamlike.

nine. all perceptions lost now, closer.
ten. will time repeal all this, again?

copyright ©2002 hayden a. james

My poetry is at:  http://www.thehayden.org

© Copyright 2002 hayden a. james - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-04-04 09:37 PM



This takes more than one read to appreciate the impact...well done Sir...I shall read it again in the morning, in a whole new light...

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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2 posted 2002-04-04 09:44 PM


An excellent adventure, the dance and ritual... Really good. ThisDiamond
haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda
3 posted 2002-04-05 07:54 AM


Thank you so much! The experience of this girl is what inspired this all.

Hayden

My poetry is at:  http://www.thehayden.org

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