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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-04-04 04:35 PM



Wonderfill


forgive me
throw me
a rope
only it
can save me
a line
with hope

my heart
hurts
mistakes have
been spent
when I say
I’m sorry
it is exactly
what I meant

then and only
then
with emptiness
so real
forgiveness changes
a life
releasing this void
to be wonderfill


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2002-04-04 04:38 PM


1slick_lady - I've been away for a while, but you still write beautiful words.

BC

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2002-04-04 05:06 PM


Lady,
you take the mundane and turn it into magic. Slick, very slick!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-04-04 05:07 PM


Wonderful wonderfill

Mistletoe Angel
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Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-04-04 05:14 PM




(smiles) This is absolutely touching, sweet friend, forgiveness indeed teaches us many things and may it always teach us and educate us with new hopes and horizons to follow! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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