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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-04-04 02:53 PM


I surrender dear
you own all I have to give
it was always yours

Inspired by:Body and Soul


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-04-04 02:56 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know she must feel so special reading these words knowing she means so much to you! (big hugggsssss) May you always surrender in loves true happiness together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-04-04 02:59 PM



Yep! You done did good!

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2002-04-04 03:11 PM


Lovely...so much you say, and what grand inspirations you have....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

RosePetal
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4 posted 2002-04-04 03:51 PM


oooh i love this one!
makes me smile

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-04-04 03:55 PM


Yup!  Like I keep sayin...you're the best!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
6 posted 2002-04-05 05:56 AM


Splendid!

Charisma

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7 posted 2002-04-05 09:52 PM


Oh to hear someone say these beauiful words to me.
You say so much in such a short and simple format.
Sandra

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