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Open Poetry #19

Playing with the Tinman

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-04-04 01:57 PM

Senryus

Sunlight bright shining
Where did you go this morning?
Come shine bright for me

Could you be brightness
With glimmering velvet eyes,
And smiles on moist lips

Hug me with warming,
Make me notice not the clouds,
Make me to be yours

Cloudy skies though dark
Hold power behind the soft
Colors to release

Gazing into eyes
A flower feeling so soft
Brightening the sky

Emotions will fly
Pushing back the gray of day
Lost in velvet eyes

~velvet eyes~ to warm
swirlingbreezes to surround
cloak you in brightness

Flying now swarming
Swirling with lyrical voice,
Emotions warming;

Touching of your hair
Brushing back a fallen strand
Caressing with care

Smiling with moist lips
*Blushing*warmth rises from touch
Eyes kissing your thoughts

Moist eye to moist lips
Cradle your head in my hands
Cascading hair slips

Framing velvet eyes
Softly kissing parting lips
In happiness cries

Eyes to eyes in pools
Reflecting wants and desires
Senses overwhelmed

Eyes see the fire,
Caught in a touching caress,
Reflects desire;

Gazing in deep pools,
Gains flames in the tenderness,
Refuses to cool

Heat captures the night
Velvet blankets desires
'Til the morning dawns

M and T

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-04-2002 01:59 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-04-04 02:26 PM

Aren't these...more than special? Methinks so...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-04-04 02:45 PM

I have seen one of those Senryus before.
Wonderful!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-04-04 09:06 PM

always special when sharing poetry words, Karilea ...*s
thanks

and I...I am not sure if you saw one before..if you did I may have taken one that was mine and posted it before..but I don't recall *s

hugss
M

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