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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-04-04 01:35 PM



Perhaps In Longing


For you, I shall wear my sheerness,
exposing the warmth of heart,
the always love, that I hold inside.

It will tempt you with those lingerings,
I promise. You will expand,
yours to mine and those thoughts
that dwell, keeping you returning to me.

I have you secreted, cached,
and only unveiled when that moment
of "ever" arises. Only then will I reveal
my true self to you and will you finally know
what you have been missing...
and perhaps longing for.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2002-04-04 03:15 PM


that is the moment that suspends itself in time. . .

wonderfully done my friend. . .

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Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-04-04 03:21 PM



I am liking this very much...how is that "project" coming?

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3 posted 2002-04-04 04:21 PM


He will be ONE lucky man, too

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4 posted 2002-04-04 05:28 PM




(smiles) This is soooooo wonderfully compassionate, sweet friend, I wish for the best to come beytween you and you can both discover each other and fulfill each others needs with comely love forever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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5 posted 2002-04-04 06:56 PM


enjoyed
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6 posted 2002-04-04 07:17 PM


Maureen, you do this so so well. This is truly wonderful writing. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-04-04 08:19 PM


nakdthoughts - beautiful poem, as always...

BC

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2002-04-04 08:26 PM


Sven..I am happy to suspend your thoughts even for a brief moment..*s thanks

Karilea..I am working on them again..sorry but I really   coughed so much I could barely  sit up and work on them these past two weeks..only  sat here  to try and calm the cough..but I think  my medicine may be helping..if not I am swallowing horse pills for nothing..*s
M


Interloper...I would think he would feel lucky... if..but one ever knows do they...
~smiles
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-04-2002 08:51 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-04-04 08:51 PM


For you, I shall wear my sheerness,
exposing the warmth of heart,
the always love, that I hold inside.

Beautiful, romantic thoughts, Maureen...and you express them so very well.

~oodles of hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2002-04-05 04:55 PM


Noah...comely love..you say things in a delightful way *s

hugss
M

vandana..thanks  you are appreciated *s  

Floria...I am glad you enjoy my words. *s

M

Bill...as always.I thank you *s
M

Lyra..romantically intentioned *s
thank you for all your words..
hugssss and hope the day goes well for you.
M


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